Evie Morrow

[evie]

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[atrb=width,430px,true][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style,border:5px solid #000000; background-color: #09030A; padding: 5px][style=padding-top: 4px; border-bottom: 4px #1C1C1C solid; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 29px; letter-spacing:-2px; color: #47314D; text-shadow:#000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align: left; text-transform: lowercase] ✧ Evie Lynn Morrow[/style][style=background-color:#161612; border: 4px solid #1C1C1C; float: right; height: 100px; width: 100px][/style] [style=margin-top: -21px; width: 286px; background-color: #0C010F; border: 1px solid #1C1C1C; padding: 3px; font-size: 10px; color: 706673;]✄-- SUB-RACE: Pure Blood ✄-- AGE: 16 ✄-- BIRTH DATE: September 7 ✄-- SEXUALITY: Straight ✄-- OCCUPATION: Waitress at a small cafe[/style] [style=margin-top: -20px; height: 20px; border-bottom: 2px dotted #1C1C1C; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color:#47314D; text-shadow: #000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align: left; text-transform: lowercase]overview[/style][style=border: 1px solid #1C1C1C; background-color: #0C010F; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; padding: 3px; color: 706673]✄-- BIRTH POWER: Elemental ✄-- SUB-TYPE: Lightning ✄-- POWER LEVEL: 1 ✄-- MAIN ATTACK POWER: Electricity ball ✄-- ADDITIONAL POWERS: ~ ✄-- LOVE LIFE: ~ ✄-- TALENTS/HOBBIES: Writing, reading, sports, climbing, singing, chilling, talking ✄-- INSTRUMENTAL: Does singing count? ✄-- FACE CLAIM: Fairy Tail ~ Levi[/style] [style=margin-top: -20px; height: 20px; border-bottom: 2px dotted #1C1C1C; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color: #47314D; text-shadow:#000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align: right; text-transform: lowercase]personality[/style][style=border:1px solid #1C1C1C; background-color: #0C010F; font-size:10px; text-align: justify; padding: 3px; color: 706673; overflow: auto; height: 80px;]✄-- Evie loves making friends and is extremely nice. She is sweet, funny, outgoing, and friendly, but also has a sharp tongue. So normally, she is fun to be around. She isn't shy at all, so you'd have a pretty hard time intimidating her. Evie is a chatterbox, do she's always fun to talk to. Evie loves playing pranks on others and breaking the rules, so it's no surprise that she gets in trouble pretty often. She isn't afraid of getting in trouble, so she is very mischievous and rebellious. Hates being told what to do, and ignore whoever is talking if they are lecturing her or telling her to do something she doesn't want to. It's her life, and she wants to live it as she wishes without someone breathing down her neck and ordering her around. She can flirt if you seem nice and funny, but she won't overdo it. As much as Evie would like a boyfriend, she won't say yes to just anyone. They'd have to be pretty darn nice is they want to win her over. She is pretty proud, hating losing to others or being reprimanded, and she argues quite often, especially of you say she's wrong.[/style] [style=margin-top: -20px; height: 20px; border-bottom: 2px dotted #1C1C1C; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color: #47314D; text-shadow: #000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align: left; text-transform:lowercase]appearance[/style][style=border: 1px solid #1C1C1C; background-color: #0C010F; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; padding: 3px; color: 706673; overflow: auto; height: 80px;]✄-- Appearance- Evie has shoulder-length, shaggy blue hair with bangs. Her eyes are deep brown pools, and they always have warmth in them. Face-wise, she has a clear, smooth, creamy complexion, a small nose, and a pretty mouth. She's thin, lithe, and agile, similar to a cat. She moves quickly and easily, as she is light on her feet and quick to react. Evie is really short, standing at 4' 9" which causes her to only weigh about 90 lbs. Clothing- Evie's clothing style is pretty consistent. In the summer, she will wear frayed jean shorts or skirts , and colorful airy shirts. In the winter, she will commonly wear darker jeans and a black hoodie over a graphic tee. For shoes, she either wears flip flops or goes barefoot in the summer, and she'll wear black combat boots in the winter. She almost always is wearing a yellow-orange colored headband to keep her bangs out of her eyes, and commonly wears necklaces or earrings.[/style] [style=margin-top: -20px; height: 20px; border-bottom: 2px dotted #1C1C1C; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color: #47314D; text-shadow: #000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align:right; text-transform: lowercase]history[/style][style=border: 1px solid #1C1C1C; background-color: #0C010F; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; padding: 3px; color: 706673; overflow: auto; height: 80px;]✄--Evie was born earlier than she was supposed to, so, naturally, she was quite weak and tiny. The doctors were unsure about whether she would die or not, because of her condition. Miraculously, she didn't die right after birth or while she was still at the hospital. But she did suffer a lot. Being a sickly young child, she was unable to do several things the other children were able to do. She would have to stay indoors at all times under the constant watch of her mother or father. During her time, since she had no way of going outside and playing, she stayed inside and read and did schoolwork. That is probably why she's so smart now. Her powers fully developed when she was 10, but she was still very weak physically. As she grew older and began to approach the age of 12, her parents were unsure about whether she would be fit to go to the academy or not. Evie, of course, had been looking forward to going there since she was a little girl. But as she reached the age of 13, she began to grow stronger. Evie could do simple things that she had not been able to do before, like run or play sports. So as soon as she felt well enough, she got extremely active, playing sports and running around outside all the time. You'd think she would be socially awkward because she had been locked up in her house all her life, but on the contrary Evie was quite friendly. It didn't take her long to get as fit as any other kid, and strong enough for her parents to allow her to go to the academy when she turned 15. [/style] [style=margin-top: -20px; height: 20px; border-bottom: 2px dotted #1C1C1C; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color: #47314D; text-shadow: #000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align: left; text-transform: lowercase]behind the mask[/style][style=border: 1px solid #1C1C1C; background-color: #0C010F; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; padding: 3px; color: 706673; overflow: auto; height: 80px;]✄-- CBOX ALIAS: Blast ✄-- ROLE PLAY YEARS: 4 ✄-- OTHER CHARACTERS: ~ [/style]

[Amaya Shimazu]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=valign,top][atrb=style,background: url(http://i56.tinypic.com/2583ujl.png); width: 400px; padding: 10px; border: #0c0c0c solid 15px;][style=background: #0a0a0a; border-bottom: #0a0a0a solid 6px; line-height: 10px; font-family: georgia; letter-spacing: -2px; font-size: 25px; color: #753c78; text-align: right; font-style: italic; padding-right: 10px; margin-bottom: 10px;]evie's review: you've got some derps.[/style][style=border: #222222 solid 5px;][style=background: #1a1a1a; border-left: #201721 solid 5px; padding: 5px; color: #767676;]Blasty, get in the Shunosaurus, yo. -u- OVERVIEW: MAIN ATTACK POWER Possibly detail her "electricity ball." As in how she may incorparate it in with her offense and defence. Most characters have a weapon. While she can be the type to simply not use or carry one, state so there, then others may be assured of such. There ought to be no surprise switchblade or sword draw at a moment's notice; I'm not implying that you would do such, but I know better than to expect certain things out of others I'm not acquainted with. LOVE LIFE She may not have any experience regarding this matter, but do include something there that was recommended for the area. As in "anything goes here. past lovers, perceiving of love, current loves, etc." Simply explain her perception of the topic; what she feels about loving another; how she might handle it; etc., etc. INSTRUMENTAL Yes, singing does count. c: Knowing this, please enlighten on her style. How her voice sounds, her voice range, anything that can help other members know what to expect when, for instance, their character(s) happen(s) to catch her singing. PERSONALITY Her personality seems to be focused on extremes and somewhat opposing traits. There's a fine line in being exceedingly nice and having a spitfire retaliation. She also seems a little sue-y to me; based on what you've provided she's outgoing, smart, friendly, devious, not underminable, and she's appealing both socially and physically. Add negative traits and lose some of her positive ones. If there were any negative traits in there, they seemed to have been worded in a positive light, making the difference as indeterminable. Resolve how she can be so boisterous and mischievous when she'd been cooped up in her house for a good entirety of her life thus far. This really bothers me, as it seems odd that such traits can spawn from little social interaction. Please include at least five (5) likes and five (5) dislikes in this area. APPEARANCE This I really don't have a problem with. You met the requirements and it is good of itself. HISTORY You've done good at skimming over the whole of her life, but I'd rather you've detailed more. Throw in some experiences in learning her power. Include a few interactions or at least some explanation to her personality if you intend on keeping her close to what she is now. Just add more--add something that can reflect on her personality. As it stands, it has given a synopsis of her history, but it is rather blah to read as it doesn't seem to really enrich her past. Every past has the potential to be very involved and in-depth without being terribly long, even if they are frail and unable to go outside for too long. SYNTAX I'm just going to hit around some small things I picked up right now. It's proper to spell out numbers if they're one hundred or less. I noticed you use 'so' frequently--please mind that. Okay, now more of an assessment. There are some sentence structure mishaps here and there. If you write how you speak--since this is what I am assuming just by reading through this--fix that. Informal and OOC is fine, but when you are role-playing, I wouldn't want to read something that doesn't sound structured or proper when I hear it aloud. The only thing I can recommend to make anything clearer is to just go look at other accepted biographies for examples. Post a note in the notification thread when you're done editing what I have mentioned and I'll re-review her bio~ :3[/style][/style]