Pierre LaFoudre

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[atrb=width,430px,true][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style,border:5px solid #000000; background-color: #09030A; padding: 5px][style=padding-top: 4px; border-bottom: 4px #1C1C1C solid; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 29px; letter-spacing:-2px; color: #47314D; text-shadow:#000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align: left; text-transform: lowercase] ✧ Pierre LaFoudre[/style][style=background-color:#161612; border: 4px solid #1C1C1C; float: right; height: 100px; width: 100px] /IMG][/style] [style=margin-top: -21px; width: 286px; background-color: #0C010F; border: 1px solid #1C1C1C; padding: 3px; font-size: 10px; color: 706673;]✄-- SUB-RACE: Pure Blood ✄-- AGE: 18 ✄-- BIRTH DATE: January 1 ✄-- SEXUALITY: Straight ✄-- OCCUPATION: Library part-time[/style] [style=margin-top: -20px; height: 20px; border-bottom: 2px dotted #1C1C1C; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color:#47314D; text-shadow: #000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align: left; text-transform: lowercase]overview[/style][style=border: 1px solid #1C1C1C; background-color: #0C010F; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; padding: 3px; color: 706673]✄-- BIRTH POWER: Acceleration ✄-- SUB-TYPE: n/a ✄-- POWER LEVEL: Power Level 1 ✄-- MAIN ATTACK POWER: In battle, Pierre is very evasive. Although he hardly does enter combat, he tries to avoid having to use aggresive actions. He performs amazingly while avoiding attacks. However, he doesn't do very well when attacking. Usually, he will avoid combat entirely or at least escape the battle before much damage is done. While fighting or sparring, Pierre equips a special glove on each hand. These gloves are made up of plate Iron. On the tips of each finger a long iron claw is extended to about two inches. The claws, however, are not for dealing pain to the opponent. They are used for gripping onto walls, the ground, and other obstacles in order to be more evasive. ✄-- ADDITIONAL POWERS: If you bought or won a second power, it goes here along with it's level. If not, put n/a. ✄-- LOVE LIFE: n/a ✄-- TALENTS/HOBBIES Enjoys playing games and sports with frirends. Talented at analyzing situations and possible outcomes and talented at his instrument. ✄-- INSTRUMENTAL: Cello ✄-- FACE CLAIM: Reshiram from Pokemon[/style] [style=margin-top: -20px; height: 20px; border-bottom: 2px dotted #1C1C1C; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color: #47314D; text-shadow:#000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align: right; text-transform: lowercase]personality[/style][style=border:1px solid #1C1C1C; background-color: #0C010F; font-size:10px; text-align: justify; padding: 3px; color: 706673; overflow: auto; height: 80px;]✄-- He likes to meet new people. He often will approach a stranger with a complement. He likes to help strangers with stuff. Very loyal to the subhumans. Respect for the race. Tries to avoid bad situations. Example, if someone insults him he will probably say something like "That's very nice of you". Exception is if disloyalty is shown towards his race. He cannot stand messy settings. He must have the place squeaky clean. He often will neatly stack items in a shop. He has Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. Everything must be perfectly straight. He can't have a stack of books where one book is upside down. He enjoys watching people duel and fight. He finds it interesting to see how different people react to different situations. Cares a lot for homeless children and orphans. He often donates charity money. Although he avoids battle and doesn't use too many direct attacks. He trains a lot and doesn't mind dueling in order to get better at fighting incase he ever needs to fatally strike someone. His favorite food is candy. He always has a sucker in his mouth. If he went a few hours without candy, excluding when asleep, he would go into a rage and demand candy from the nearest person. He enjoys playing his black cello. He has been playing it for 6 years, since he was 12 years old. During free time with friends, he likes to play games and sports. He dislikes stupid people who just decide to not use their mind. He hates being challenged to a fight, considering his options are to make the opponent tired or to escape the fight. Very critical about appearance. Hates it when people wear nasty clothes and wierd hairstyles. His strongest advantage would be his ability to tire out an opponent and evade most attacks. His greatest disadvantage would be his disability to deal effective direct damage to an opponent. [/style] [style=margin-top: -20px; height: 20px; border-bottom: 2px dotted #1C1C1C; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color: #47314D; text-shadow: #000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align: left; text-transform:lowercase]appearance[/style][style=border: 1px solid #1C1C1C; background-color: #0C010F; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; padding: 3px; color: 706673; overflow: auto; height: 80px;]✄-- Pierre is not very built, yet has enough muscles to not be really skinny. His eyes are blue with very dark lining. His hair is long and snow white. It is razor-like in most spots. The length is mostly in the back. On the top sides of his head, two chunks of hair stick out almsot like small wings. He is very pale. Pierre stands at 6' 1" and weighs around 155 pounds. His clothing is coloured according to his hair. The only parts of his clothing that are not white are the metal belts and fasteners that are on places such as his waist, buttons, leg guards and arm guards, and his gloves. There are many pieces on his outfits that sort of stick out so that they wave while he walks or stands in the wind (epicface). [/style] [style=margin-top: -20px; height: 20px; border-bottom: 2px dotted #1C1C1C; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color: #47314D; text-shadow: #000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align:right; text-transform: lowercase]history[/style][style=border: 1px solid #1C1C1C; background-color: #0C010F; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; padding: 3px; color: 706673; overflow: auto; height: 80px;]✄-- Pierre was born on the date of the new year at 1:00 am. His parents were rich and noble, not to mention French. They were a respected family. He was originally named Leo LaFoudre, after his father. But the intern had mistakenly heard "Pierre"..she was looney...and she had put Pierre LaFoudre under his offical documents. His parents decided to go with the name Pierre. As a todler, and even a child, Pierre was spoiled. His rich parents bought him all the toys and candy he wanted. Good thing he takes care of his teeth. This is also the reason for his addiction to candy. He lived in a big room with mini rollercoasters and a train track that went across his entire floor. When he was 10 and a half he was given two baby twin sisters. Around this time he started being able to travel at fast speeds. His father shared the power of acceleration with him and his father trained with him everyday. His father would teach him to stay away from combat and to use sheer agility to overwhelm enemies. His father would have him chase down wildcats and baseballs that his dad would throw. Pierre was naturally good at using his power. By the time he was 12, he grew tired of his sisters. They were stealing his parents away from him, his father never trained with him anymore and he never got any gifts from his parents. All of their mass amount of money was going to his sisters. Eventually, he got sick of it, he packed his stuff into a blanket tied to the end of a stick. He ran away. He ran until he couldn't tell where he was and he lived on the streets. Everyday he would manuever around vendors and merchants, stealing their food and water. He lived on the streets for two years, until he was 14. He had forgiven his parents and decided his sisters would be grown out of all their needs by now. He talked to street people and eventually found his way back to his house. When he finally made it, he was tired and hungry. He walked up his driveway (which was surrounded by dead trees) and he made it to his former home. He saw a pile of wood covered in ash...What had happened? He may never know, as the local villagers had not known either. He was taken into his old neighbors home and at the age of 15, he was sent of the academy. He has lived in the academy ever since.[/style] [style=margin-top: -20px; height: 20px; border-bottom: 2px dotted #1C1C1C; font-family: georgia; font-style: italic; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color: #47314D; text-shadow: #000000 1px 1px 2px; text-align: left; text-transform: lowercase]behind the mask[/style][style=border: 1px solid #1C1C1C; background-color: #0C010F; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; padding: 3px; color: 706673; overflow: auto; height: 80px;]✄-- CBOX ALIAS: Pierre ✄-- ROLE PLAY YEARS: 2 years ✄-- OTHER CHARACTERS: n/a [/style]

[Amaya Shimazu]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=valign,top][atrb=style,background: url(http://i56.tinypic.com/2583ujl.png); width: 400px; padding: 10px; border: #0c0c0c solid 15px;][style=background: #0a0a0a; border-bottom: #0a0a0a solid 6px; line-height: 10px; font-family: georgia; letter-spacing: -2px; font-size: 25px; color: #753c78; text-align: right; font-style: italic; padding-right: 10px; margin-bottom: 10px;]pierre's review: not bad~ c:[/style][style=border: #222222 solid 5px;][style=background: #1a1a1a; border-left: #201721 solid 5px; padding: 5px; color: #767676;]Ah, welcome to Shuno~ :D Oh, and don't forget to register your name in the Shunosaurus(the c-box)~! ;3 OVERVIEW Ah, I noticed you changed his name, which is great~ I was going to ask you to anyway xD MAIN ATTACK POWER I'm glad that you detailed it some~ :3 LOVE LIFE He may not have any actual experiences here, but it was requested that you, for example, give his perception of it, what he thinks of dating, liking someone, and whatnot. At any rate, 'n/a' isn't acceptable, so please add at least three or four sentences of insight here. c: TALENTS/HOBBIES  - INSTRUMENTAL  - FACE CLAIM Hehe, Reshiram~ I'm assuming Pokemon are okay, considering there are some Happy Tree Friends running about here xD PERSONALITY I like that you hit on a lot of areas, but you didn't really expand much on them. I ask for at least two more lines on each bullet to better define the trait in whatever way. Also, I think you missed in listing (at least) five likes and five dislikes, as well as some fears. Please include these and you'll be good here~ APPEARANCE If by 'dark lining' you mean the whites of his eyes, then no. He's Subhuman so he's of the 'normal' race, please leave it white if this is what you meant. Hehe, and he complains about other people's weird hair xD Though he's cool, a little hypocritical in regards to that, but cool still~ ;3 You have two paragraphs as requested, though they seem a little short. :/ Possibly add a little more wherein you can? HISTORY Ah, what I'd like to hit on is right at the beginning. Did he have any interaction with other kids while he was still young? You didn't really include much on his childhood prior to ten-years-old, thus I say it'd be best to throw in at least a summary of this time in his life. It's practically impossible for a Subhuman to not encounter a Manor in some sort, so I ask that you throw an instance like such in here~ Considering he is loyal to his own kind, I imagine he'd have a dislike for Manors. But whatever, simply add something that's somewhat important of a run-in with one. c: And at the end, regarding his school life at the Academy, please add possibly a few more lines of how he has been since he arrived--it's been three years since then, after all. SYNTAX I was pleasantly surprised when I didn't find all that many mistakes here--other than what I think were simply typos. Regarding the 'typos', namely, I saw a few misspelled words and missing apostrophes. Other things, though, I did spot quite a few fragmented sentences, so I recommend that you watch yourself as you type. Another thing I would like to point out (even though it's not really all that big of a deal) is that it's proper if numbers that are one hundred or less to be spelled out. Respond in the notification thread when you are done editing Pierre's bio and I'll re-review him~ [/style][/style]